This post is of a
book review called, THE MAGIC ICE-CREAM. I hope my book review is done okay.
The story is like this
Once upon a time there were two brownie brothers, Tick and Tock. They were in a garden and having their ice-cream when a cloak of a witch brushed on Tock's ice-cream , making it magical. It had turned his ice-cream into a wishing ice. Tock was excited about it. They both started wishing for different things for themselves when Tock got angry at Tick for using his ice-cream to wish things for himself. "Tick! You're not to use my wishes. This is my magic ice, not yours." Tock made those 6 ices vanish that Tick had asked for. This kind of tiffs started happening between the two and it grew into a fight. They both were nasty with each other because of the enchanted ice and finally lost the ice-cream completely as a cat ate it all away while they were busy fighting with each other.
Below is the work that I did at home.
I would be happy to get your comments on what and where I have gone wrong or what I need to improve. Thank you!
